Monday, May 16, 2022

Teachers comments

You’ve had a good go at the front covers and it is clear that you have a decent eye for layout and design. You especially seem to have grasped the placement of sell lines and the selection of images. The idea in the task was to produce two covers that shared common codes and conventions. I think you could have done that, but perhaps I needed to be clearer with my instructions. 

When you are presenting your work, consider some brief supporting text and also the layout on the page. If blogger won’t co-operate with you, try arranging your images onto a page in Photoshop and then just importing the whole thing.

Well done.

Mr. H


As for the script/storyboard.
You've used a very informal style, which is okay because there are no rules. However, my advice would be take a look at this website:https://www.writersstore.com/how-to-write-a-screenplay-a-guide-to-scriptwriting/ 

This shows a screenplay format. As you can see, the details of description are really very clear, so another person could take your script and use it.

Also, be aware that you probably need a lot more shots than you have. Really think carefully. 

I actually quite liked those drawings

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You’ve had a good go at the front covers and it is clear that you have a decent eye for layout and design. You especially seem to have grasp...